Overhaul and redo of direction! needs focus!

After our second critique session we had issue over our character design as well as a clear story direction and we realised that this was because we didnt really know who our characters were. we had established that we had two female characters who were friends but we didnt have any established back story or character development to either of them so we started to develop a character profile for the two characters. This way we could actually start to understand our characters motivations.